- Master Tan's broken English is great, very authentic/is stereotypical and inconsistent
- The conflict between Justin and Quinn is great, well done/there is no discernible conflict in the story
- The development of Quinn's character is moving and believable/she's a horrible, unsympathetic person
- She's a rip-off of Supergirl/Dark Angel/Kill Bill/Le Femme Nikita
- It's a strong, character-driven story/nobody's motivations make any sense.
I guess keeping a diary can be useful after all, if only to remind oneself that feedback from the peanut gallery isn't all it's cracked up to be.
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